1973. An effective literary work does
not merely stop or cease; it concludes. In the view of some critics, a work
that does not provide the pleasure of significant closure has terminated with
an artistic fault. A satisfactory ending is not, however, always conclusive in
every sense; significant closure may require the reader to abide with or adjust
to ambiguity and uncertainty. In an essay, discuss the ending of a novel or
play of acknowledged literary merit. Explain precisely how and why the ending
appropriately or inappropriately concludes the work. Do not merely summarize
the plot.
In The American Dream, Albee
concludes with Grandma leaving her family forever. Grandma tells the
audience that everyone has what he wants, or at least, what he thinks he
wants. So, though Albee's ending is certainly an ending, it isn't
necessarily conclusive or satisfactory, for as Grandma suggests, the family isn't even
yet truly happy, they have not yet found that elusive satisfaction, and they still may have
the slightest chance of redemption left.
Throughout
the play, Mommy and Daddy just can't seem to get the satisfaction
they're looking for. As Grandma suggests, this is because they're
looking in all the wrong places--they are so off the mark, in fact, that
as they search their apartment they can't find anything, not even
Grandma's room. All that should matter to them is a sense of dignity,
according to Grandma. But Mommy and Daddy don't even have this, as they
throw temper tantrums in hat shops and dismember babies in an attempt to
"fix" the broken product. The source of Mommy and Daddy's problems and
the heart of the play lies in the American Dream. Grandma's heart lies
with the Old American Dream: she is frugal, earnest, hardworking and
smart. Mommy and Daddy, however, embody the New American Dream:
materialistic, shallow, power-hungry, and wealth-crazed.
In
the end, the Young Man becomes Mommy and Daddy's new "toy" child, their
new "bumble." The Young Man truly is the new American Dream, and
Grandma even calls him this when he enters the apartment. He is handsome
to a fault and not quite smart enough to have misgivings about being
adopted by Mommy. So, in the end, one comes in, and one goes out.
Grandma leaves the apartment, and her family, forever. Mommy and Daddy
chose newer values over older values, and they should be happy with
their lot, now that they've finally found that satisfaction, that
perfect family image. In this lies Albee's "conclusion."
But
are Mommy and Daddy happy? Grandma thinks not. Even if Mommy and Daddy
may be temporarily satisfied, it will never last. Like Mommy's hat,
which she was happy with for all of two minutes, or the bumble, which
was promptly dismembered, satisfaction is directly proportional to
standards. And unfortunately, the standards of the new age seem to be
exceedingly high. Mommy and Daddy may think they want it all: the fame,
wealth, beauty, etc., but what they really want, and must find for
themselves, is dignity. Mommy and Daddy's true fault lies not in the
societal values they embrace, but their own virtue of pride. For the audience, this conclusion may be unsatisfactory, but surely the intention of a conclusive ending was what made it so. Albee's conclusion forces the audience to recognize Mommy's, Daddy's, and their own faults, and to come to the same conclusion that the characters eventually must. Mommy and Daddy must
accept that they will not always get satisfaction, that human beings are
not products to be bought, used, and thrown away, and that ultimately,
what we want and what they want are not so different: to be loved, to be
happy, and to find what's worth living for.
I think this is a really well written reflection on the American Dream and how the ending seems to hint at the fact that the play has not yet been resolved. I also liked how you talk about how his ending ties into the problems of the Old and New American Dreams. I think this piece must have been very well revised as it seems to have the qualities of a polished draft. The only possible addition I can see you making would maybe be adding a quote or some additional paraphrasing from the conclusion of the play in you own work to reinforce your argument.
ReplyDeleteI agree with John that this is an excellent reflection on the American Dream and the themes it covers, but it feels kind of undirected. It's not so much an essay as it is an analysis, but I think there's a very quick fix. Your body paragraphs are sort of thesisless, so while they are valid comments on the work they don't really contribute to your overall point about Albee's ending- in fact, the only times you mention the ending are in the beginning and end. If you can keep bringing it up in your body paragraphs, and explain why each idea makes the ending satisfactory and valid, I think that'd really tie this essay together.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great essay! I think you answered the question very well. One thing I think you could work on grammatically is your use of commas. For example in your first paragraph you said, "So, though Albee's ending is certainly an ending, it isn't necessarily conclusive or satisfactory, for as Grandma suggests, the family isn't even yet truly happy, they have not yet found that elusive satisfaction, and they still may have the slightest chance of redemption left". This is a good descriptive sentence but the overuse of commas disrupts the flow and becomes very distracting for the readers. The sentence is a run-on sentence so if you break it up into two sentences it will flow much better. Overall though there is very little else to critique. I agree with Sarah that mentioning the plays ending more often would be helpful however I think your current structure is good as well. Each paragraph you have-although it doesn't directly relate to the ending-sets you up well for your conclusion where you wrapped up your ideas and tied them all to the play's ending very well.
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